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WRITING OPENINGS TO GRAB A READER, AGENT, EDITOR

You’ve got the first sentence to make someone want to read your first paragraph (and the first paragraph to make them read the first page, and the first page to make them read opening chapters).

Actually, you have the book or story title to get them to read the book/story description, then that description to get them to read the first line, but that’s a whole other discussion.

So what is the common wisdom on ways to a write story opening that grabs and engages your readers?

1)  Writing an Opening Hook

  • Your opening hook needs to flow naturally into the rest of the story, be true to it, match its tone and style, and not feel like a gimmick or a standalone bit of cleverness just to get the reader’s attention.  It perfectly sets up the reader for the journey to follow.
  • Ways to “hook” your readers include:
    • Open with a shocking or funny statement or fact;
    • Setting up a situation that leaves the reader with a question that they feel they just have to keep reading in order to get answered;
    • Show the main character with a problem the reader wants to keep reading to find out more about and see resolved (more on this below);
    • In general, connecting with the reader, grabbing their interest, and then rewarding that with an interesting and satisfying second sentence, then paragraph, etc. that flows naturally from that first hook.

Sometimes an opening line may be the thing that inspires the rest of your story to begin with.

If not, consider waiting until you’ve written your full first draft to go back and start massaging the opening line, as your entire opening may change to fit what you end up actually writing for your ending.

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RPG-Inspired Laughs: Brief Awakenings

BEHOLD! A short, funny fantasy story about a gelatinous cube named Rümba!

As a fan of Terry Pratchett and Douglas Adams I promise it’s as good as every book shelved just below theirs at the Thrift Store!

Buy it now! Rate it when you’re happy, or possibly drunk!Please and thank you 🙂

This story was inspired by the adventures of the Dungeon Scrawlers (and just because I needed a fun and silly palate cleanser between larger projects).

Enjoy! And thank you.

Book cover for the short story "Brief Awkenings - a gelatinish cube story" by Randy Henderson
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Tips for Writers doing a Reading

Here are some things I’ve learned as an author giving readings of my work:

Do not select a piece that fills your entire reading time. If your reading slot is 30 minutes, PREPARE A 15 MINUTE PIECE (with a 5 minute extension prepared in case you end up rush-reading it and are left with extra time). If your reading time is 1 hour, select at most 30 minutes of reading material with a 10 minute buffer (though that much time just sitting quietly and listening to you read can be a bit much to put an audience through).

What about the rest of the time?

You will need a few minutes to say hi and do intros and get started.

If the piece you are reading needs some setup and context, you will need time for that.

And you may want some time for questions and answers after the reading, to engage with your audience and increase their interest in you and your work. Be prepared with a few example questions to help prime the pump and get the Q&A rolling as the audience may be shy at first in asking questions. Or loosen up the audience with some trivia questions, anecdotes or jokes.

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Easter as Opportunity

Easter.  There is a real chance for celebration and creating a modern miracle here by not forgetting where this day comes from, and by celebrating that in a very real way.

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Why I am Not Paneling at Norwescon This Year


Norwescon is awesome.  Let’s just make that clear right up front.  This is not about them.  I was invited to be a panelist this year and I politely declined for “me” reasons.  I want to talk about those, I guess in case it is helpful for others.

I have been blessed to participate in Norwescon for a number of years.  And every time, it has been a joy and an honor.  I do not view it primarily as a promotional opportunity (though I do not ignore that benefit).  I also do not view it as some earned and expected acknowledgment of my status as a published author, because that is not what it should be (and because I began paneling before I was professionally published).

So why am I not participating this year? 

I guess first because of Imposter Syndrome, and a bunch of deeper weird feelings I am working through and will probably write posts about someday, that comes in part from being “Between books.” 

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What Being a Convention Panelist Means to Me


Genre Cons like Norwescon have to me always been a celebration of fandom, of the genres and content we love.  You do not have to be a “pro” or PhD or celebrity to do that, on or off panels. 

I do see participating as a “pro” to be a humbling responsibility, and to be taken seriously. 

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Wonder Woman: Inspiration and Pain and Moving Forward

Wonder Woman. So many reactions to this movie.  And for me, the movie itself has not only inspired the Feels, but the reactions to the movie have as well, good and bad.

Wonder Woman

 

Most reactions that I see are inspiring and wonderful, such as this list of reactions from students in a Kindergarten class, or this awesome video of a woman inspired to play like Wonder Woman and kicking imaginary butt.  The garden hose bit gives me endless joy.

I see all of the people uplifted and inspired by this movie and it makes my heart sing.

There have also been negative reactions too.  Some, as one would expect, from men who just don’t get it (or feel somehow threatened in their worldview).  But also criticisms from women who felt the movie misstepped with hurtful exclusions or stereotyping, or was too narrow in its feminism.

I posted before about how I wished we could have more “Yes, And” rather than “Yes, But.”
I see “Yes, and” in the reactions to the Wonder Woman movie like the Bazaar piece, and I find that as inspiring as the movie itself.  Because how we talk about issues even in a Wonder Woman movie has implications and impacts that go way beyond this one movie.

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Those Other Christmas Movies

I love the Christmas season.  But there are only so many good holiday movies.  And then you start to get into the less good holiday movies.  If you don’t ration properly, you may be watching Earnest Saves Christmas before you know it.

I also am a sucker for romance.  Anyone whose read my stories probably picked up on that.

Which brings us to that special class of movie: the Hallmark/ ABC Made for TV Holiday Romance.  These have, I’ll admit, become my guilty pleasure over the holidays.  And here’s my breakdown of the ones most commonly available.

HOLIDAY IN HANDCUFFS

Holiday in Handcuffs

Despite the lack of BDSM play, it still had a better story than 50 Shades.

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How to Become a Novelist (part 2): Publish a Novel

You’ve written a novel?  CONGRATULATIONS!  So … now what?  Did you make it as gooder as you can get it?  Well then, it’s time to consider sharing it with the world!

But which path should you take to fame and riches?  Let’s start with another fun flow diagram, then I’ll get into the nitty-gritty details.  I think I’ve practically compiled a small book here, so, enjoy!

Publishing Options

 

CAN’T WE ALL JUST GET ALONG?

AT-A-GLANCE COMPARISON

DIGGING INTO TRADITIONAL PUBLISHING

How Do Traditional Publishers Pay Me?

I Want a Six Figure Advance!

You’ve Gotta Fight for your Rights to Party

How Many Books Do I Have to Sell to be “Successful” Traditional Style?

How Do Used Books and Libraries Affect Me?

What about File Sharing?

What’s a “Big 5” vs Small /Indie Press vs Vanity /Subsidy Press?

The Traditional Publishing Process

WHAT IF I TRY THE TRADITIONAL ROUTE AND EVERYONE REJECTS ME?

DIGGING INTO SELF-PUBLISHING

Some Food for Thought Before We Proceed

But Wait, There’s More:

How Does Self-Publishing Pay Me?

How Many Books do I Have to Sell if Self-Published?

The Self-Publishing Process

OKAY, SO CAN I MAKE A LIVING AT THIS WRITING THING EITHER WAY?

SHOULD I GET AN AGENT?

HOW DO I PROMOTE?

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How to Become a Novelist (Part 1): Write a Novel

Over the next couple of weeks I’ll be posting some info on how to become a novelist.  Here’s the first, an infodumpographic and general Q&A on the first step — write a novel.

Why?  Well, careful scientific studies have revealed that the number one reason for not having a novel published is, in fact, not finishing a novel.  A lot of writers struggle to get past this step, but I hope this information helps.

Infodumpographic

How big is this mountain I must climb? (How long is a novel?)

Are we there yet? (How long does it take to write a novel?)

How many millions will I make from my books and movie deals?

Seems easy enough, you just … Oooo, cat videos!

Don’t Stop Believin

Is a novel like a long short story?

I finished! Now what?

Writing a Novel

 

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